Someday (Part 2)

.........................until finally he came to her. She asked her for her name. Then, shortly, they knew each others. The camping events held on that day. They came there and joined every single plans they had. Elita was very impressed with him. Definitely, his smile. She just wanted to stare at him whenever he smiles, even he didn't even know that she stared at him.

"Keep your chin up, someday there will be happiness again. You'll see."

It was such a precious moment with him. The ones which never be forgotten. She did know that it happens once in a lifetime. She never knew when will she meet him again. And, never be strong enough to expect that time.

It was gone. It was a year ago. Now, she is fine. Trying to be fine. Fine living with her new life. Living without someone special. Living without the warmest smile. Living without the heart attacks. Living with the normal heart beats.

She is just signing in her account on facebook, reading some postings on her timeline when suddenly she finds him. She even forgets that she had been friends with him, the one who she likes-the-most. She reads his posts, which says:

"Everyone, go invite my pin 227xxxx" 

She feels gloomy. She is shocked of what's just happened. She takes her cell phone quickly and invite him. She feels nervous at first, but actually, she doesn't know what to do. She just wants to know him. Yes, that's it. She says in heart.

It doesn't take too long to know that he's now in my contact. It seems impossible to be accepted by him because, he might be not remember me. Even if he's always on my mind.

I cannot stop to stare at phone, waiting for something that won't happen. A miracle that he might greet me. But it happens. He sends me text within the next ten minutes. He says: "Thanks for the add". OMG! look what's just happened! I got him! I don't know what to write, yet it's just happens spontaneously. 

We become friends for along six months since that day...

                                                                to be continued...

Someday ( Part 1 )

This is my first short story to be shown. As a beginner, i know that it might be not quite good but I'm trying my best. I'll make it into parts and this is the first. Hope you guys enjoy it!

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This is the very beginning of her long-long journey. A journey to reach the one. The one whom always be her dreams. The one who makes her believes that the "happy ending" is not only exist in fairytale, but so in life.

" He's not a stranger. We have met before, once upon a dream"

Elita is her name. A fifteen years old girl who loved by many. A sweet girl who loves to laugh and a little childish. She is now in her last grade of Junior High School. She prepares everything for her last exams, final examination. In hope that she will pass it perfectly and heading for a better future. She is a light-hearted girl, but a kind of introvert. She has best friends, and everyone loved to be her friends, but deep inside, she has a big story. 

The story began a year ago. When she saw a boy standing next to her with a blue shirt and jeans, got busy with his job. His name was Tama. He came to her school in case to promote his event. He was the alumni of that school, the same school with Elita. But now, he is in his last grade of High School. He looked charming with his face, cute with his appearance, and warmed with his smile. He just officially impressed her at the first sight. With everything he has.

The event held the next two weeks. At that time, Tama often went to her school to lead some meetings with the members of the event. And so Elita, she never stopped stare at him whenever she met him. Elita and her best friends joined that event, in case to be closed with him. She knew and realized that they had different at ages, but she had no idea how much she liked him. 

One day, the one she loved unexpectedly came to her, not to asked her about that event, but personally. And everything looked different, she felt like the whole world stopped and stared for a while, the time stopped going, and she thought that she had a heart attack, which stopped her heart beats.

She didn't know why he came to her until finally........

to be continued...

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